第六天：乡村游记
A TRIP TO THE COUNTRY

One Sunday my mother had(made) me take my little brother to take on trip to the country. She let me take good care of him. While we were walking along the road, the sun was shining brightly and the breeze was blowing gently. We saw the beautiful flowers smile (smiling) at us and heard the birds sing (singing) their sweet songs on the trees. The scenery was indeed very pretty (beautiful). When we felt tired, we returned home. We saw Mother (our mother) wait (waiting) for us at the door.

一些解释：

had(made)两者都可以用，had属于传统的说法，而made更加口语化

smile (smiling) 可以用smile也可用smiling。但在此处用smile更合适，因为smile在这描写是的美丽的花儿对着我们笑，非常生动，而smiling是说花儿在笑但不一定是对着我们笑，所以用smile

sing (singing) 与上面的smile与smiling一样区别

on the trees 应为in the trees

pretty (beautiful)用beautiful更加合适

Mother (our mother) 用Mother更好

有一个星期日，我母亲叫我带小弟弟去乡村游历。她吩咐我要好好照料他。 当我们沿着道路行走的时候，太阳灿烂地照耀着，微风轻轻地吹着。我们看见美丽的花儿对我们微笑着，并听见鸟儿在树上唱着悦耳的歌曲，风景实十分美丽。 当我们感觉到疲倦的时候，我们就回家了。我们看见母亲正在门口等候我们。